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I thought that I would write my paper about how Southwest residential area is being turned into a freshman part of campus. The main focus of this paper will be how it screws upper classmen out of living there, how I feel it is going to be a disaster in terms of an increase in partying rather than a decrease ana lastly how the school forces student to live on campus then makes it an inconvienience to do so.

Who will you address your letter to? Also, it seems you've got two points, so you might want to sort them out: one is a change in demographics of SW and the other is the notion of it being difficult to live on campus. Each seems to me to be a different issue and therefore different audience. WHAT in particular is it that you WANT TO CHANGE? (CAPS for emphasis, smile.) steph (COM) 01:29, 11 April 2007 (EDT)

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My sources are going to be used mostly for number and I will be using them as illustrations too. They will be showing how Southwest is an ideal place to live on campus for upper classmen and not for freshman and also the numbers of people that are being misplaced in this change.

Hmm. ok but this doesn't relate to the four categories you need to cover. Review the assignment, ok? Remember you were supposed to give a description of how you will use each individual site, not all of them collectively. Also, I hope that these sources start to show you the nuances of the case, which you will need to address. steph (COM) 01:31, 11 April 2007 (EDT)