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The Original Sentence: I believe in this quote and wish there was another answer to this language barrier, but robbing people of their language hurts just as much as physical pain.

New Sentence: I believe in this quote and wish there was another answer to this language barrier, but robbing people of their language hurts just as much as physical pain. As a society we can accept the barrier and begin to comfort those who are lost in translation. People don't need extra problems to deal with. Paul 14:20, 4 May 2007 (EDT)

Grammar Corrections

Original Sentence: There are a lot of things, which are in this country, many people want to be legalized. It could be the right to pratice something, a belief, an action, an expression or an item that is illegal. However, many people want certain things to be legalized, but the true question is, do they need it to be legalized. The fight majiuana for legalizing, truly turns heads when the basis of the argument is stone cold facts. Marijuana should be legalize because of positive things that overule the small negative things about it and it should not be subjected as a drug.

New Sentence: There are many things, which are in this country, many people want to be legalized. It could be the right to pratice something, a belief, an action, an expression or an item that is illegal. While many people want certain things to be legalized, but the true question is, do they need it to be legalized? Some agruments are supported by people's feelings and some arguments are guided with one's intelligence. The fight marijuana for legalization, truly turns heads when the basis of the argument is stone cold facts. Marijuana should be legalized because of the many positive things that overule the small negative things about it and it should not be subjected as a drug. Paul 14:38, 4 May 2007 (EDT)